ext_16847 ([identity profile] delphinapterus.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] lkh_lashouts 2007-05-07 11:57 pm (UTC)

That was excellent. LKH's voice was nailed to a T. The paragraph about having already fed from Micah was so spot on that it could have been a direct lift from a real book. This to me shows how badly LKH's writing has been failing because in less than 5 pages somebody has managed to write something so close to a real LKH novel that unless one thinks for a second it's hard to realize it's not real. The nipple tassels are maybe a tad over the top but it's over the top in a way that is almost plausiable. The codpiece has the same thing because of LKH's heavily touted preference for up-dating old fashions.

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