ext_73239 ([identity profile] roguetailkinker.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] lkh_lashouts 2007-05-27 10:47 am (UTC)

Anita and Merry with their insane desire for putting things in their mouths would be needed.

OMG yes. That's what makes it even worse- the monotony. If you're going to write umpteen million sex scenes, at least get a little creative, fercryin'outloud! Have her put Jason over her knee and paddle his butt. Invite (OMG!) another woman to play. Let Jean-Claude and Asher hump like bunnies while Anita eats popcorn and enjoys the show. Do SOMETHING besides P-i-V and deep-throating, please!

Ahem. Rant over. But seriously, LKH's sex scenes come across like an inexperienced teenager who just discovered she can put her mouth on his peepee and OMGthat'ssoKINKY!!!


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