I've read a few good sex scenes before in certain books. There was a nice 3some scene in this Eric Jerome Dickey book I read a few years ago, and I enjoyed The Sleeping Beauty Trilogy. If I remember correctly Jackie Collins has had some good ones.
Personally what makes a good sex scene for me is emotion and that is what LKH lacks. With her it's all bang bang, scream, tighten, spill, done... with everyone stroking Anita's ego and telling her she's the best thing since sliced bread. You really don't get that feeling that anyone is enjoying what is going on, and if they aren't enjoying it then why should you?
FWIW I've read some knock your socks off sex scenes written by normal little fanfic writers that put LKH to shame. ^_^
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Personally what makes a good sex scene for me is emotion and that is what LKH lacks. With her it's all bang bang, scream, tighten, spill, done... with everyone stroking Anita's ego and telling her she's the best thing since sliced bread. You really don't get that feeling that anyone is enjoying what is going on, and if they aren't enjoying it then why should you?
FWIW I've read some knock your socks off sex scenes written by normal little fanfic writers that put LKH to shame. ^_^