http://frabjously.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] frabjously.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] lkh_lashouts 2008-01-06 02:40 am (UTC)

Rude conversations: If you are going to have people talking about the heroine like she isn't even there, then write books in the third person. It's just annoying to have people dissecting Whorenita's emotions while she sits there and drools.

YES! And it makes for extremely boring dialogue and scenes. "Show not tell" anyone?
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