See, this is where TAKING A STEP BACK and not looking at the story for a while does some good. I get that she's on a deadline, but if she can wait to hold a STRIPPER NAME CONTEST, then she can wait long enough to get BN out of her system (see, this is probably why she's Swallowing Darkness, it leaves that nice minty aftertaste!) and then go back to edit when she's not thinking about the book.

Course, being the contrary workaholic that she is, this will not happen. But still. R&R, it's good for the soul.