ext_34167 ([identity profile] tsubaki-ny.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] lkh_lashouts 2009-12-29 02:37 am (UTC)

"...it was that grin, that light of mischief that made his eyes bright with thinking naughty thoughts.

Not sex, though that was in there, but just a host of things he knew he shouldn't do, but so wanted to do."


Why isn't that a direct contraction?? His naughty thoughts were "not sex," even though sex "was in there" -- in his naughty thoughts? Or is "in there" somewhere else? Or -- you know what, never mind.

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