ext_78960 ([identity profile] shadwing.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] lkh_lashouts 2012-12-14 09:13 pm (UTC)

Here's the changed parts per Lashouts- they are in the shower at this time.

Hardcover:

I found I did have a voice and said, "Micah, stop, please stop."
Micah licked the back of my neck, and I shuddered, pressed against the wet wall.
"Please, Micah, I'm not on birth control." A clear thought at last.
He bit softly at the back of my neck. "I had myself fixed two years ago. You're safe with me, Anita."
"Please, Micah, please don't."
right after that is when Micah rapes her, so she never actually gave consent


Paperback:

I found I did have a voice and said, "Micah, Please," but I was no longer sure what I was aksing.
Micah licked the back of my neck, and I shuddered, pressed against the wet wall.
"Please, Micah, I'm not on birth control." A clear thought at last.
He bit softly at the back of my nect. "I had myself fixed 2 years ago. You're safe with me, Anita."
'Please Micah, please don't. If we have sex I'll feed on you. Feed on you like some kind of vampire."
"Then feed, if thats what you need, what you want."
He bit harder, just this side of drawing blood, and my body went passive, calm.

I do believe that somewhere in the Shower Scene, Anita DOES ask JC for help with the 'problem' with Micah, rather than sending help, he makes her grope him (Micah) and then cuts off from her.

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