That's why I mentioned internal and external conflict. I don't mean literally someone throwing a punch in every scene or anything, I mean that each scene has a relevant sense of conflict. I.e. a problem that needs to be solved or something important that needs to be addressed. Nothing should be coasting in a story, imo.
All of those are legit points. Thanks for your input! :D
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All of those are legit points. Thanks for your input! :D