ext_245996 ([identity profile] mitrian.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] lkh_lashouts 2013-12-09 01:39 am (UTC)

There is so much wrong with that alleged sentence, I don't even know where to start.

.....ok, wait, I _do_ know where to start.

"some drowned you in watery weeping"

So.... we, the readers, have been drowned? That IS the past tense. Perhaps she meant to say "drown" instead?

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