ext_183063 ([identity profile] ravens-shadow.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] lkh_lashouts 2014-01-19 11:23 pm (UTC)

It sounds like a darling, like she knows exactly how it should sound and how the scene would look, and how the lines themselves play with the idea of something being so wonderful it feels like a dream... but it's a pretty (to her) bit of nothing. There isn't anything there to tease readers, IMHO.

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