Argh. No no no, you do not edit a whole book in two days. YOU DO NOT. A week, maybe. If you're really good and a card-carrying grammar nazi. Which LKH is not. No, bad Laurita. No sex-fu for you.

Put down that book right now, call your friends and have -them- proof it. Then you can come back when they've finished and proof it again.

And, btw, if the writing isn't as perfect as you thought? You fix it. You fix it and then you start proofing/editing it again. And if it's sucky? You fix it. You fix it and then you start proofing/editing it again. See, there's a pattern here...