ext_185135 ([identity profile] dreamstrifer.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] lkh_lashouts 2014-07-30 03:22 pm (UTC)

Holy crap in a basket, Laurell. Commas are not permission for run on sentences.

Also, So much second-hand embarrassment for that second passage. She can't even look at a guy without crippling arousal.

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