a) Why not tell you the title of the book I’m going to use as an example, because it’s still untitled.

I cannot believe that sentence was written by someone who gets paid to write for a living. I know she means something like, "Why not tell you the title of the book I'm going to use as an example? I can't, because it's still untitled." As it reads, however, that line makes no sense.

b) JC's skin looks painful in that drawing.