http://world-dancer.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] world-dancer.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] lkh_lashouts 2014-07-30 11:23 pm (UTC)

Even published, polished people can have problems with show don't tell in the first draft for exactly the same reason.

I'm a fan of Tim O'Brien's minimalist style, but he achieves that style by writing everything out, and then going back through his stories and taking out words he considers unnecessary.

Step 1 is getting the story out of you. Step 2 is making it better.

Post a comment in response:

This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting