"We will finally have sex with Sholto, King of the Slaugh."
There you have it. She now only thinks of her plot as who "she" is going to have sex with next...
"and we were not supposed to date him let alone have sex with him.... "
"we"...eh, to each their own, but it's time to take a step back from your characters, hunny.
"One of my friends who often sees things about me that I don't..."
Ok, change that to one of my friends and all of my readers and that would be more accurate...
"Micah, the character, came out of the end of my first marriage. It would take me years and books to figure this out. He is not now, nor has he ever been based on my husband Jon. Sorry, but he's not."
we have to make sure everyone knows that Micah is a character now? And, my ass. You need that friend to tell you that, not only has Anita found her YES man, but so have you. He was the head of her fan club...how much more YES do you need to get?!
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There you have it. She now only thinks of her plot as who "she" is going to have sex with next...
"and we were not supposed to date him let alone have sex with him.... "
"we"...eh, to each their own, but it's time to take a step back from your characters, hunny.
"One of my friends who often sees things about me that I don't..."
Ok, change that to one of my friends and all of my readers and that would be more accurate...
"Micah, the character, came out of the end of my first marriage. It would take me years and books to figure this out. He is not now, nor has he ever been based on my husband Jon. Sorry, but he's not."
we have to make sure everyone knows that Micah is a character now? And, my ass. You need that friend to tell you that, not only has Anita found her YES man, but so have you. He was the head of her fan club...how much more YES do you need to get?!