You've pretty much captured most of what I wanted to say. So instead I'll just add a few other things:
1a) The first nine books had a total of two sex scenes, while every book beginning with NiC has at least one or more, right? So the amount of sex has gone up.
4a) And there's the fact that her "fix" is like putting a band-aid on a gunshot wound. Even "[rewriteing] some of Anita’s interior dialogue" (and shouldn't that be monologue?) wouldn't make it better, since the actions of both Anita and Micah make the scene look like rape.
6a) That's probably another instance of her thinking she wrote that in, or implied it, but didn't get the necessary feedback to make her realize that she hadn't. This is why beta readers/editors and revisions are important.
7a) And that whole excuse just makes it sound sketchy as hell. You'd think doing stuff like that would encourage other therianthrope groups to avoid asking them for help. "You and yours may end up joining the Coalition whether you like it or not"? I feel like some people in the German government were having similar thoughts back in the 1930s.
Also, "The Coalition for Better Understanding Between Lycanthrope and Human Communities" is a long, clunky name. Even making it into an acronym, it's too long.
8a) That's the sneak-peak involving Micah? Is he just not in this book, then?
Addendum: "If you want me to pay attention to you, be nice." Says the woman who regularly refers to her detractors as "haters". Civility is a two-way street, Lala.
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1a) The first nine books had a total of two sex scenes, while every book beginning with NiC has at least one or more, right? So the amount of sex has gone up.
4a) And there's the fact that her "fix" is like putting a band-aid on a gunshot wound. Even "[rewriteing] some of Anita’s interior dialogue" (and shouldn't that be monologue?) wouldn't make it better, since the actions of both Anita and Micah make the scene look like rape.
6a) That's probably another instance of her thinking she wrote that in, or implied it, but didn't get the necessary feedback to make her realize that she hadn't. This is why beta readers/editors and revisions are important.
7a) And that whole excuse just makes it sound sketchy as hell. You'd think doing stuff like that would encourage other therianthrope groups to avoid asking them for help. "You and yours may end up joining the Coalition whether you like it or not"? I feel like some people in the German government were having similar thoughts back in the 1930s.
Also, "The Coalition for Better Understanding Between Lycanthrope and Human Communities" is a long, clunky name. Even making it into an acronym, it's too long.
8a) That's the sneak-peak involving Micah? Is he just not in this book, then?
Addendum: "If you want me to pay attention to you, be nice." Says the woman who regularly refers to her detractors as "haters". Civility is a two-way street, Lala.