ext_14976 ([identity profile] ladymina.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] lkh_lashouts 2006-06-07 04:14 pm (UTC)

where were you when the other books came out?
there are a couple of facts that just don't work
I mean the carrier thing (Anita as a carrier of several kinds of lycantrophy, and maybe even contagious, when usual lycatrophies are only contagious in animal form, and she has none)
then lkh confuses the ages of her vampires, especially Damian and JC
the way you write Dolph's name, is it Dolf (first pages of OB) or Dolph - like most of the way
and so on and so on
there is no consistency in her books, cause she can't get the facts straight anyway - or well maybe she looses all her notes a couple of times a month

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