The Demon Princess Chronicles

[mulder200.livejournal.com]

So, has anyone read this Lucinda, Darkly: The Demon Princess Chronicles (Paperback)? One review wrote that it follows in the vein of LKH and another said the erotic scenes would make even her blush (which considering how bad her sex scenes are isn't saying much) noentheless I was wonder what you fellow snarkers have to say.

Comments

[mitrian.livejournal.com]

Just from the part of the excerpt I skimmed, I'm not impressed. She seems to have graduated from the LKH Skool Ov Grammar.

May I smack her with a comma? Please?

[quizzicalsphinx.livejournal.com]

First sentence of excerpt: "Night fell softly with purple fingers of dusk--"

My Brain: " . . . yeah, that's quite enough of that."

[othellia.livejournal.com]

Purple fingers... My first thought is of frostbite, but I don't think that's what she's trying to convey.

[mitrian.livejournal.com]

My first thought was bruising...