I only have the immediate dissections of the piece posted, and I'm cleaning them up to post to Lashouts (I'm up to part 3, where Anita meets her second client and this verse is same as the first and need to post that ASAP, and right now I'm going through the book of essays on AB:VH too) so there's less capslock rage and tangents on Questions I Have About The Animation Industry.
Mostly the copy pasta of Flirt was just to roughly hack it to pieces to see if there was anything worth saving. It's kind of interesting to see that the book itself is just under 50k words (which is about the length of a reasonable Big Bang fic), and such a large percentage have been axed without detriment to the overall story. At least, that's what would have happened were I here editor.
Man, you may want to give Bullet a miss for Richard. He's apparently been in therapy, or replaced with a pod person. I am choosing to believe that he's off sipping cocktails with the real Edward and Anita hasn't realised that he's left. So there's some guy all "why are you calling me Richard? What is going on here? Stop taking off your clothes...stop taking off my clothes!"
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Mostly the copy pasta of Flirt was just to roughly hack it to pieces to see if there was anything worth saving. It's kind of interesting to see that the book itself is just under 50k words (which is about the length of a reasonable Big Bang fic), and such a large percentage have been axed without detriment to the overall story. At least, that's what would have happened were I here editor.
Man, you may want to give Bullet a miss for Richard. He's apparently been in therapy, or replaced with a pod person. I am choosing to believe that he's off sipping cocktails with the real Edward and Anita hasn't realised that he's left. So there's some guy all "why are you calling me Richard? What is going on here? Stop taking off your clothes...stop taking off my clothes!"