Um, all right... Why did she write "yes, I mean sex" in brackets and then continued with the same context in the sentence after she closed them? I'm not from an English speaking country, so I don't exactly know the rules, but the brackets seem very out-of-place. Even for LKH...
Also, I wish that she'd stop sounding like a 13 year old... "Vacation, Yay! Am gonna have sex! *does the scooby dance* I'll write all about it when I'm finished!" Paraphrasing, bust still...
And whoa, I can't get over the fact that she reads other people's books! I mean, it almost distracted me from the Ewww! I got when I read what else they were doing. And Jon reads? Whoa... *is amazed*
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Date: 2005-06-12 10:51 am (UTC)Also, I wish that she'd stop sounding like a 13 year old... "Vacation, Yay! Am gonna have sex! *does the scooby dance* I'll write all about it when I'm finished!" Paraphrasing, bust still...
And whoa, I can't get over the fact that she reads other people's books! I mean, it almost distracted me from the Ewww! I got when I read what else they were doing. And Jon reads? Whoa... *is amazed*