LKH Lashouts

Here's the last bits of chapter 27 and all of chapter 28. God, this book is painful.

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I'm back and hopefully you'll like this.

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This chapter could've been done without dragging another character in, but oh well.

( Chapter 24 )

Until there actually is a chapter that isn't filler comes back, I'm sticking with the abridged style.
( ch 22 )

What starts a bit promising with Anita's anxieties, turns into total sap by the end. So prepare to start puking rainbows, folks.

( Chapter 18 )

It's now time for filler bringing in a character who might as well not be in it.
( Chapter 16 )

Please Read First: Anyone whose read my mock of the fanfic of a fanfic, Faithful Hearts: The Wanderer, will know of this experiment in one part where I put my Ipod on shuffle, went to the middle of a song or skit and made the line into my response while still having it fit in with what was going on. Since this shorter chapter is about Anita, Jean-Claude and Richard cuddling and yammering about their hair, it was a good time to try it a second time.

( chapter 12 )

Be prepared for even less happening in this story. As Linkara said, "Say what you want about Van Helsing, but at least they did stuff in that movie."

Also here's what one reader had to say: "You know what this reminds me of? Dragon ball Z. We have long flashbacks going on in the middle of the action, juvenile banter and dialogue, metaphorical dick measuring (what with power levels), and an obnoxious character that everyone else tolerates beyond reason (Vegeta = Anita). I'm going to take a wild guess and say that the sex scenes have long since become boring, un-erotic, and repetitive."


( Chapter 11 )