Someone over at the official board got a copy that was accidentally released early and has been posting chapter by chapter. Some posts are summaries and some are full dialog. For anyone who doesn't want spoilers stop reading now.
SPOILERS
The Harlequin comes to town. Apparently it torments Anita and crew by making them say things that they are thinking and might otherwise monitor. This includes:
1 chapter of Malcolm looking for Anita to save his church from the Harlequin and save Malcolm's soul for God.
4-5 chapters of Nathanial wanting Anita to either top him or let him get his BSDM outside of the relationship, while being sexually monogamous to Anita
2 chapters of sex with Richard. In one chapter the sex is so painful that Anita is left with cramps and bleeding. I get the impression that she is badly bruised up to and into her womb.
Micah being perfect
Richard attempting to share a bed with Anita, Micah and Nathaniel.
Richard being jealous because Anita has promised to eventually have sex with Sampson
1 scene with the MOAD where Richard scares away the ubervamp by turning into a wolf
1 scene with the MOAD where she threatens to claim Anita for her own, then immediately turns around and says she won't if JC gives Anita the 4th mark. She tries to give Anita the weretiger form as a gift/curse but doesn't succeed
1 phone conversation with Edward where Edward agrees to come to town. He has to bring along Peter because he a) has a crush on Anita, b) is into rough sex since he was raped by Amanda in OB and c) is blackmailing Edward into bringing him along. Otherwise he'll tell Donna about Edward vs. Ted. Also in this conversation, 42 Year old Donna wants to have more kids.
And the chapter where Raphael wants to become Anita's Blood Apple because a) he needs to whore himself out as the rats need to be nearer to the power structure and b) he's desired Anita for years.
Actual plot:
-Harlequin comes to town to observe Malcolm and JC and is tormenting the gang by playing with their emotions
-The Harlequin planted bugs in Richard's home and the homes/businesses of the major vampires
This is through chapter 20. So no I don't think I'll spend $16-17 dollars on this dreck. IF anyone on the board actually likes it, I might borrow it from the library
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Spoilers
Date: 2007-05-31 01:38 am (UTC)Someone over at the official board got a copy that was accidentally released early and has been posting chapter by chapter. Some posts are summaries and some are full dialog. For anyone who doesn't want spoilers stop reading now.
SPOILERS
The Harlequin comes to town. Apparently it torments Anita and crew by making them say things that they are thinking and might otherwise monitor. This includes:
1 chapter of Malcolm looking for Anita to save his church from the Harlequin and save Malcolm's soul for God.
4-5 chapters of Nathanial wanting Anita to either top him or let him get his BSDM outside of the relationship, while being sexually monogamous to Anita
2 chapters of sex with Richard. In one chapter the sex is so painful that Anita is left with cramps and bleeding. I get the impression that she is badly bruised up to and into her womb.
Micah being perfect
Richard attempting to share a bed with Anita, Micah and Nathaniel.
Richard being jealous because Anita has promised to eventually have sex with Sampson
1 scene with the MOAD where Richard scares away the ubervamp by turning into a wolf
1 scene with the MOAD where she threatens to claim Anita for her own, then immediately turns around and says she won't if JC gives Anita the 4th mark. She tries to give Anita the weretiger form as a gift/curse but doesn't succeed
1 phone conversation with Edward where Edward agrees to come to town. He has to bring along Peter because he a) has a crush on Anita, b) is into rough sex since he was raped by Amanda in OB and c) is blackmailing Edward into bringing him along. Otherwise he'll tell Donna about Edward vs. Ted. Also in this conversation, 42 Year old Donna wants to have more kids.
And the chapter where Raphael wants to become Anita's Blood Apple because
a) he needs to whore himself out as the rats need to be nearer to the power structure and b) he's desired Anita for years.
Actual plot:
-Harlequin comes to town to observe Malcolm and JC and is tormenting the gang by playing with their emotions
-The Harlequin planted bugs in Richard's home and the homes/businesses of the major vampires
This is through chapter 20. So no I don't think I'll spend $16-17 dollars on this dreck. IF anyone on the board actually likes it, I might borrow it from the library