That screaming, spine cracking sex just makes me laugh so much. The woman is writing like she's 15 and discovered orgasms. They are good but they don't cause screaming, punching, thrashing, biting, gnashing, and clawing she gives it all. Next time I have sex I'm just going to scream - full out scream - lets see how the husband reacts to that *lol*
One tic that bugs me is 'eating me from the mouth down' and her freakin' beasts always moving around like 'fur on the inside of your brain' or whatever part. It's not just the same sayings but the same things - her beast running up that long hallway, crashing against her skin, rubbing against someone elses beast, wanting to taste blood, *yawn* on and on. Find something new to write about - resolve this beast bs and move on.
The other tic is how she gives that look that everyone knows she means business - she'll pull the trigger. It's the biggest baddest deadliest look evah because everyone backs down from it. Ma Petite Moron is serious! Oh good grief - next she'll have laser eyeballs.
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Date: 2008-01-05 09:30 pm (UTC)One tic that bugs me is 'eating me from the mouth down' and her freakin' beasts always moving around like 'fur on the inside of your brain' or whatever part. It's not just the same sayings but the same things - her beast running up that long hallway, crashing against her skin, rubbing against someone elses beast, wanting to taste blood, *yawn* on and on. Find something new to write about - resolve this beast bs and move on.
The other tic is how she gives that look that everyone knows she means business - she'll pull the trigger. It's the biggest baddest deadliest look evah because everyone backs down from it. Ma Petite Moron is serious! Oh good grief - next she'll have laser eyeballs.