Date: 2008-01-25 04:32 pm (UTC)
That's why I love doing these, because you guys always bring up things that I hadn't thought of, and I love the new perspectives! I didn't even think that bringing Peter around OLAF of all people is obviously a dumb idea, and that he should clearly be in school, lol.

That last scene was one of the most violent scenes in an AB:VH book I've seen in a long time. And it was great, actually, to be honest. But putting Peter in the midst of that situation (and the aftermath of it, which i'll get to next time~) was a terrible idea--it can only trigger the traumatic events that happened in Obsidian Butterfly, and probably do more damage than good to his mental and emotional state.

I will give a tiny bit of credit to the weretiger, in that she did wait until Anita was alone with two teenaged bodyguards. Given Anita's life, there's hardly a minute when she isn't surrounded by fewer than 10 people, so it did seem a good time to get rid of her. I don't think Soledad knew just how much Anita knew until she had actually attacked and Anita admitted that she knew their names. It was daytime, so I assume the vampires were still asleep. (though maybe a note would have done, lol)

Thank you so much for the detailed comment~~
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