Date: 2012-05-25 01:25 pm (UTC)
then he made his fingers go in and out of me faster and faster, as if he were fucking me with them

I'm pretty sure that when someone is thrusting his fingers faster and faster in and out of one of your orifices, he is actually fucking you with them. There's no "as if" about it. Criminy. Also, does Anita know you can suck guys off without them having to face-fuck your uvula? You're not required to cram them down past your gag reflex.

Ugh, this sex is so dull. I think the worst thing about it is that it really highlights how static they all are as characters. What about this scene makes it unique to this book? I swear it could have taken place in any novel where the three of them were banging.
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