OH MY GOD LKH SAY "PENIS" PLEASE. This coyness about specific anatomical reference needs to stop. Mostly because:
"Hold her in place, your body is her gag while I fuck her. If she moves from your body I will deny you release tonight"
"screaming my pleasure around Jean-Claude’s body as he pushed himself as far down my throat as he could go"
"I made small helpless noises around Asher’s body, as if he were a living gag"
"I felt the water move around me, sloshing and caressing my body"
LKH, by using "body" instead of the more reasonable "cock", you seem to have implied that Anita has a dick. Which... would actually make me like her a little bit more as a character, but I really doubt that was your intent. Also, I realize that every sex scene is written exactly this way, but the fact that everyone Anita (or Merry) fucks seems to take "screaming wordlessly and clawing hard enough to break skin" as encouragement just makes me hate everyone in these books.
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Date: 2012-05-25 05:17 pm (UTC)LKH, by using "body" instead of the more reasonable "cock", you seem to have implied that Anita has a dick. Which... would actually make me like her a little bit more as a character, but I really doubt that was your intent. Also, I realize that every sex scene is written exactly this way, but the fact that everyone Anita (or Merry) fucks seems to take "screaming wordlessly and clawing hard enough to break skin" as encouragement just makes me hate everyone in these books.