I'd be thoroughly turned off if someone I was about to sleep with had to nail everything out prior to getting down. I think it could be hot, but... it would have to be better-written. And there's no enthusiasm here. They discuss their activities like they're discussing income-tax returns. :X
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Date: 2014-12-07 08:32 am (UTC)I think it could be hot, but... it would have to be better-written. And there's no enthusiasm here. They discuss their activities like they're discussing income-tax returns. :X