Also, that's a comma splice. And the second independent clause could use a comma or two. Observe:
I wonder what my grandmother would think about our tower by the sea. To my knowledge, she never saw the ocean, and never wanted to.
Doesn't that read so much better? LKH, I only minored in English in college, and most of those credits were language-related classes. What's your excuse?
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Date: 2014-12-22 09:33 pm (UTC)I wonder what my grandmother would think about our tower by the sea. To my knowledge, she never saw the ocean, and never wanted to.
Doesn't that read so much better? LKH, I only minored in English in college, and most of those credits were language-related classes. What's your excuse?