So, Anita is her obvious self-insert, and Richard was written to be her perfect husband, but the relationship fell apart as her real-life marriage did, and she can't see where people could get the idea that Richard was based on her ex? How blind is this woman?
How would Jean Claude satisfy him? I haven't read the books in a while, but I can't remember them ever really getting on. The kind of grew to tolerate each other, but that was it. I got the impression that it was more of a business relationship, where they occasionally had sex.
She hopes that Richard will find someone special? She can write that someone in! Has she forgotten that she controls this universe? And why can't he date someone who's human? Have him start dating a co-worker who works out that he's a werewolf, and approaches him to let him know that she doesn't care. Have him meet someone when he's out hiking. He could date a sibling of a new werewolf, when he's helping them adjust and letting them know how to cope. So many ways to write this. If she can't, that probably means that she doesn't actually want him to move on.
Richard is in a BDSM relationship with Asher? When did this happen? I thought Asher left.
And another skeevy quote. Why is JC the damsel in distress? Is JC now incapable of saying 'please back off, Asher'? If he isn't saying that, then Richard doesn't really have the right to decide that Asher isn't allowed to touch. Also 'it'? Stop touching it? People aren't possessions and they aren't toys.
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Date: 2015-05-13 04:35 pm (UTC)How would Jean Claude satisfy him? I haven't read the books in a while, but I can't remember them ever really getting on. The kind of grew to tolerate each other, but that was it. I got the impression that it was more of a business relationship, where they occasionally had sex.
She hopes that Richard will find someone special? She can write that someone in! Has she forgotten that she controls this universe? And why can't he date someone who's human? Have him start dating a co-worker who works out that he's a werewolf, and approaches him to let him know that she doesn't care. Have him meet someone when he's out hiking. He could date a sibling of a new werewolf, when he's helping them adjust and letting them know how to cope. So many ways to write this. If she can't, that probably means that she doesn't actually want him to move on.
Richard is in a BDSM relationship with Asher? When did this happen? I thought Asher left.
And another skeevy quote. Why is JC the damsel in distress? Is JC now incapable of saying 'please back off, Asher'? If he isn't saying that, then Richard doesn't really have the right to decide that Asher isn't allowed to touch. Also 'it'? Stop touching it? People aren't possessions and they aren't toys.