"dick" and "pussy" get thrown around A LOT in the book as insults or in conversations that are derogatory, although (shocker) she does actually use the word "cock" as well, once, but it's not during a sex scene.
I try to avoid using "dick" just because I hate the way it sounds, and because it gets used in way too many insults.
I agree with you it seems to trivialize the scene and the sentence would have been okay without it.
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Date: 2015-06-12 12:35 am (UTC)"dick" and "pussy" get thrown around A LOT in the book as insults or in conversations that are derogatory, although (shocker) she does actually use the word "cock" as well, once, but it's not during a sex scene.
I try to avoid using "dick" just because I hate the way it sounds, and because it gets used in way too many insults.
I agree with you it seems to trivialize the scene and the sentence would have been okay without it.