I know I keep harping on this, but oh my god this is such bad writing. This could have been a mildly interesting anecdote, but I was distracted by the comma splices, the jumbled sentences, the incorrect use of commas. It wouldn't bother me so much but this is the professional blog of a professional writer.
Also, it feels kind of pretentious, but mostly it's the writing.
(And just a personal nitpick, but I much prefer "therianthropes" to "wereanimals". YMMV, though.)
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Date: 2016-01-01 06:58 am (UTC)Also, it feels kind of pretentious, but mostly it's the writing.
(And just a personal nitpick, but I much prefer "therianthropes" to "wereanimals". YMMV, though.)