Why did she write "yes, I mean sex" in brackets...and then continued with the same context in the sentence after she closed them?
...Because she can't write or even form a coherent sentence without ten thousand copy editors sitting on her ass?
(And seriously, your grammar and spelling FAR exceeds Laurell's, and she's supposed to be a NATIVE SPEAKER. Bad Suethor, no biscuit!)
Also, I wish that she'd stop sounding like a 13 year old... "Vacation, Yay! Am gonna have sex! *does the scooby dance* I'll write all about it when I'm finished!" Paraphrasing, bust [sic] still... *snerk* Gods, that's so accurate, and true!
And whoa, I can't get over the fact that she reads other people's books! ... And Jon reads? Whoa... *is amazed*
Well, even magazines count as reading. And she's mentioned J.K. Rowling in previous posts, so we know she can read at at least a fifth-grade level.
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Date: 2005-06-12 11:36 am (UTC)Why did she write "yes, I mean sex" in brackets...and then continued with the same context in the sentence after she closed them?
...Because she can't write or even form a coherent sentence without ten thousand copy editors sitting on her ass?
(And seriously, your grammar and spelling FAR exceeds Laurell's, and she's supposed to be a NATIVE SPEAKER. Bad Suethor, no biscuit!)
Also, I wish that she'd stop sounding like a 13 year old... "Vacation, Yay! Am gonna have sex! *does the scooby dance* I'll write all about it when I'm finished!" Paraphrasing, bust [sic] still...
*snerk* Gods, that's so accurate, and true!
And whoa, I can't get over the fact that she reads other people's books! ... And Jon reads? Whoa... *is amazed*
Well, even magazines count as reading. And she's mentioned J.K. Rowling in previous posts, so we know she can read at at least a fifth-grade level.