Merry's Descriptions
Jun. 20th, 2006 09:36 am![[identity profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/openid.png)
I started rereading Kiss of Shadows and found that some of the descriptions seemed a little odd; not stop you in your tracks odd, just a bit off. I've never noticed this in Anita and not on previous reading so KoS. What really sticks out so far is on the first page where the air at Merry's home is blue. I have no idea why clean air should be blue. It sounds like the exhaust from a small engine. Maybe I'm being overly sensitive but it seems that sometimes LKH's turn of phrase for descriptions, especially in the Merry series, is odd. I can't help wondering if this is deliberately done in an attempt to make Merry seem more alien and less Anita-like.
Los Angeles is a place that people, those with wings and without, come to hide. Hide from others, hide from themselves. I'd come to hide and I'd succeeded, but staring out at the thick, dirty air, I wanted to go home. Home where the air was blue most of the time and you didn't have to water the ground to get grass to grow. Home was Cahokia, Illinois, but I couldn't go back because if I did they'd kill me, my relatives and their allies. Everyone wants to grow up to be a fairie princess, trust me it's over-rated.Full Except
From Chapter 1, page 1 of Kiss of Shadows