The sex descriptions (bleeding, innards bumping, just non-sexy sex) are the worst offenders for me now.
But the first I ever disliked was the cut-and-paste physical description of Edward. His 'eyes of a wolf' or whatever it was that might kill you or not kill you. I liked it one time, but after that she doesn't even try to write anything different. She went on to do with with Asher, Micah, etc. I think JC is the only char she bothers having new descriptions of anymore.
Also, 'spill' never bothered me, but I *loathed* every Pile of Puppies. Esp since they were leopards.
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Date: 2008-01-05 08:35 pm (UTC)The sex descriptions (bleeding, innards bumping, just non-sexy sex) are the worst offenders for me now.
But the first I ever disliked was the cut-and-paste physical description of Edward. His 'eyes of a wolf' or whatever it was that might kill you or not kill you. I liked it one time, but after that she doesn't even try to write anything different. She went on to do with with Asher, Micah, etc. I think JC is the only char she bothers having new descriptions of anymore.
Also, 'spill' never bothered me, but I *loathed* every Pile of Puppies. Esp since they were leopards.