Danse Macabre: the cover & chapters 1-3
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*shakes head* I don't even know where to start anymore.
*shakes head* I don't even know where to start anymore.
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Date: 2005-09-21 04:56 am (UTC)she reminds me of a keen little teenage girl posting her first story for someone to read. she's writing herself backwards, it's scary.
is it ardeur or arduer?
and the you're/your and it's/its thing REALLY bothers me.
but what is just frightening is the whole pregnancy thing.
ugh. ugh. ugh.
and then suddenly merry's world crosses over with anita's. let's parade a group of men in front of anita for her to choose from! it's a contest! wtf.