well, what i meant was Emma has mind-numbing description of room, each character in the room, so on and so forth. maybe not purple, but definitely tedious.
and no, the guys *aren't* super attractive. but she's trying to market them as such and it's just not working at all.
god, honestly she could spread that description of each character out over each chapter and it would be more tolerable. one chapter to mention (in passing) how comfortable it is to lean against someone her own height. another chapter where someone does a double take at the eyes. etc. the info-dump is annoying as hell.
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Date: 2010-07-09 08:24 pm (UTC)and no, the guys *aren't* super attractive. but she's trying to market them as such and it's just not working at all.
god, honestly she could spread that description of each character out over each chapter and it would be more tolerable. one chapter to mention (in passing) how comfortable it is to lean against someone her own height. another chapter where someone does a double take at the eyes. etc. the info-dump is annoying as hell.