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Disclaimer: This blog entry is verbatim, as originally posted on LKH's Facebook. Copyright belongs to Ma Petite Enterprises.
The briefest of teases from, A Shiver of Light, Meredith Gentry's adventure continues June 2014:
He held out his hand. "Come to me, Meredith, but take my hand, and we can step out of this dream."
"And where will we appear once the dream is finished?" I asked.
"Some place wonderful."
I shook my head. "Liar."
Disclaimer: This blog entry is verbatim, as originally posted on LKH's Facebook. Copyright belongs to Ma Petite Enterprises.
The briefest of teases from, A Shiver of Light, Meredith Gentry's adventure continues June 2014:
He held out his hand. "Come to me, Meredith, but take my hand, and we can step out of this dream."
"And where will we appear once the dream is finished?" I asked.
"Some place wonderful."
I shook my head. "Liar."
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Date: 2014-01-18 12:04 pm (UTC)Also, that comma before the title is driving me bonkers.
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Date: 2014-01-18 12:58 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2014-01-18 04:40 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2014-01-18 06:58 pm (UTC)I hope she says, "pretty to think so" soon. I've only read that overused phrase a million times.
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Date: 2014-01-18 10:42 pm (UTC)And, as usual, the comma before the title is pissing me off on inordinate levels.
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Date: 2014-01-19 01:09 am (UTC)Merry's harem and friends call her 'Merry'. Taranis and Andais call her 'Meredith', and unless Andais got a sex-change operation, that's Taranis. It's further hinted by the "Come to me", which is what he kept trying to pull in A Lick of Frost, and I suppose the "dream" could be related to some illusion of his. So this isn't some sort of coy dialogue, it's probably supposed to be from a climatic confrontation scene.
Unfortunately, she's a poor enough writer that one has to really work at it to figure out what she's supposed to be hinting. But if that's indeed what she's trying to do, it's a reasonable choice of 'tease'.
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Date: 2014-01-19 05:09 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2014-01-19 11:23 pm (UTC)