Also, the sentence about pretty female goblins is bothering me. The way it's written, it reads as though the purpose of priding themselves on extra limbs and eyes is solely for humanoid-spider-ladies to be hot. I'd have omitted the "so that" and stuck in a semi-colon, but I'm not actually sure LKH knows how to use those.
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Date: 2014-02-21 11:03 pm (UTC)