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Link: Feb 21 2014, 14:02
Disclaimer: This blog entry is verbatim, as originally posted on LKH's Facebook. Copyright belongs to Ma Petite Enterprises.

I'm still working hard on the edits, so here is the bottom paragraphs of page 64 of the edits for the new Merry Gentry novel, A Shiver of Light -

Date: 2014-02-21 11:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rebootfromstart.livejournal.com
Also, the sentence about pretty female goblins is bothering me. The way it's written, it reads as though the purpose of priding themselves on extra limbs and eyes is solely for humanoid-spider-ladies to be hot. I'd have omitted the "so that" and stuck in a semi-colon, but I'm not actually sure LKH knows how to use those.

Date: 2014-02-21 11:17 pm (UTC)
lliira: Fang from FF13 (Fang2)
From: [personal profile] lliira (from livejournal.com)
It probably is solely for humanoid-spider-ladies to be hot. In LKH's books, everything is about sex, and you can only want to have sex with someone if you find them extremely physically attractive, and everyone in a given culture finds exactly the same things physically attractive.

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