a) Why not tell you the title of the book I’m going to use as an example, because it’s still untitled.
I cannot believe that sentence was written by someone who gets paid to write for a living. I know she means something like, "Why not tell you the title of the book I'm going to use as an example? I can't, because it's still untitled." As it reads, however, that line makes no sense.
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Date: 2014-07-30 03:26 pm (UTC)I cannot believe that sentence was written by someone who gets paid to write for a living. I know she means something like, "Why not tell you the title of the book I'm going to use as an example? I can't, because it's still untitled." As it reads, however, that line makes no sense.
b) JC's skin looks painful in that drawing.