[identity profile] aerofish.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] lkh_lashouts
Hello, all. I'm new to this group and this is my first post. I figured I'd introduce myself with this peeve of mine.

I was reading the sample chapters for the next Anita book, and it was mentioned Anita is 27. This made me back up and go WTF(well, more than I already was). I know Anita is supposed to be in her twenties, yet that fact just never seems to stick, and I constantly find myself envisioning her as mid-30s with the mind-set, perhaps, of someone much older, if not the maturity. And giving her the age of 27 in this upcoming book really drove home the point to me, as that is my age.

Anita does not act like any twenty-something I know. For any of you around Anita's age, do you feel the same way? And I know I'm making a sweeping generalization about how a 25-30 year old should act, but shouldn't there be some consistencies with the popular culture for this age group? I have so many examples, but here's two obvious ones:

-Does she dress like someone my age dresses? Maybe if it were the 80's or early 90's, with her silk shell blouses and pantyhose and power jackets. Maybe she's going for a retro-ironic hipster thing, and I'm too dull to see it?

-She speaks with none of the slang commonly used. And while yes, "nifty" is a, well, nifty word...it's not exactly the cornerstone of a young person's vocabulary, right? Doesn't she, in one book referencing her brother's opinion of her line of work, even say something like "he says it's cool, or whatever the kids are saying these days?" Uh. Right.

In general, this is such a minor pet peeve, what with the many many MANY issues with her books I am having these days. But still, shouldn't there be a least a few references here and there anchoring Anita to the age she is supposed to be?

Date: 2006-04-17 03:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] track-04.livejournal.com
I have always found that really annoying, too. I'm 25 and I don't know anyone close to my age who would act, dress or talk like that. I'm sure there are those few anomalies out there that I just haven't met yet... but, well, this just makes it that much more obvious what a Mary Sue that Anita is, doesn't it?

I find myself always imagining her a) older and b) in better clothes when I read the books. The second is hard, of course, since LKH has to go through painful 3 page long descriptions of the same black nikes with the swoosh that she's been talking about since Guilty Pleasures.

Then again... she just doesn't write young characters well, does she? None of the men that are supposed to be young like Nathaniel or Jason really seem that believable either.

This would all be so much more tolerable if she didn't envision herself as such a great writer, too. XD;

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