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Link: Dead Ice: Nicky
Disclaimer: This blog entry is verbatim, as originally posted on LKH's blog. Copyright belongs to Ma Petite Enterprises.

We’re only two weeks away from Dead Ice’s publication. This blog will be the first one that doesn’t have a graphic novel image to go with it, because Nicky is one of several major characters that didn’t appear in the early books which were later turned into graphic novels. I’m trying to get images to go with Nicky and the rest, but for now his traditional lion form stands in for the other two forms.



Did you know that Nicky was going to be a major character when you created him?

Answer: No.

Secrets to Share: I didn’t expect to ever see him again because I thought Anita was going to have to kill him. He was just another sociopathic bad guy when he walked on stage from my imagination. I had no idea we were keeping him around until the very last minute and even then I had no idea that he would be in almost every book from that point on. Even keeping him, I didn’t know Nicky would go from bit player to supporting character to main character.

Question: Why did you do the rough bondage scene with Nicky and Anita in Affliction?

Answer: Because they are lovers, and both of them enjoy rough sex and bondage with each other.

Secret to Share: Nicky was fast becoming a fan favorite until I wrote that particular scene in Affliction. After the scene, a lot of the women fans disliked or even seemed to hate him. I was totally surprised by the reaction. Anita and Nicky had had rough sex before on stage, but some fans thought this scene was too much. Why? We’d had Anita tied up during sex before, and I believe that Nathaniel was even part of that scene, too, just as he was with Anita and Nicky in Affliction. So why the negative reaction? And none of the fans are angry with Nathaniel, just with Nicky, again why? The only difference I can see is that it’s a more serious breath play scene, which Nicky enjoys giving, and it was his suggestion to add that to the scene. I was very careful and very clear to have Anita and Nicky discuss what she was comfortable with beforehand. Nathaniel was there as an extra safety monitor and not just as an extra lover. I talked about safety issues, because breath play of any kind is edge play, which means it can be more dangerous. I did my due diligence on paper and Nicky and Nathaniel both watched over Anita to make sure she was all right. I talked about it, rather than just glossing over the possible problems. All three of them care for each other, and they all enjoyed the scene and the sex, so why did some people freak about it and start hating on Nicky? I don’t know, I honestly don’t, but some people who were fans of his are now literally haters of his, so apparently the scene hit issues for people.

Question: When will see Nicky interact with more of the local werelions?

Answer: In Dead Ice.

Secrets to Share: My research into real lions helped me shape Nicky taking over the local pride and how he runs it in Dead Ice. Contrary to the old idea of male lions as the “King of the Beasts” presiding over their territory and their harem of lionesses all by themselves, it’s rarely just one king. One lone male lion would be hard put to defend against all commers, most prides are run by a coalition of male lions. More detailed DNA testing has disproved another well loved theory in that the coalitions were genetically related, brothers, or at least cousins, but DNA proved that some weren’t related at all. Male lions are kicked out of the home territories as they come into sexual maturity, so they won’t compete with their father, or mate with their mother, or siblings. Theories are that the young male lions kicked out of their home territory meet up in their wanderings and find that hunting in groups helps them stay fed. They also fight as a group and that is a big plus among lions. In fact, prevailing theory is that the reason lions are social and live in groups is primarily to protect themselves from other lions. Also, if your lionesses like the lions in charge they will join the fight against intruding males. There have even been cases of lionesses banding together and fighting off males, so that they are a power unto themselves. It’s not common because the males are bigger, heavier, and just have more muscle to throw around, but the lionesses do most of the hunting. Males only usually come into their own on hunts when really big game is the main food source for the pride, like water buffalo, giraffe, and even elephants, on occasion. Real animals, and real science, helped me understand that Nicky was the muscle, but as a sociopath he emotionally couldn’t run a pride, so another male lion that was physically less able, but very good socially, joined him as part of his leadership coalition. By end of book we’ll add another, so he’s Rex, but it’s a three-for-one, not related to each other, just like a lot of real lion coalitions.

Sneak Peek from Dead Ice:

Nicky asked, “Do you mean you have pictures in your head of what you want to do to us?”

”Yes.”

”Are they your thoughts, or is someone putting them in your head?”

”I do not know, but even speaking with you now, it’s as if my pork dinner were talking back. I’d think I was mad, but I still want to eat it.”

”Eat me, you mean?” Nicky said.

”Yes, very much.” The southern drawl was thicker with every word, as if by the time he rushed us, or we shot him, he’d sound like Scarlett O’Hara.

”Interesting, Nicky, but save it,” I said.

”There won’t be a later for asking him questions.”

He was right, of course, but only a sociopath could have stood there this close, watching the process, and asked the questions that might help us understand what was happening. It was good that we had Nicky with us, because I was so spooked my mouth was dry.

Date: 2015-05-29 07:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] duamuteffe.livejournal.com
I can't believe this needs to be spelled out for the author, but the reason many of us don't like Nicky is that 1) he was mindwiped and turned into a slave with literally no will of his own, and the author thinks this is not a moral dilemma as long as he's (of all things) happy, as though being happy is the be-all and end-all of morality, and 2) that all of his instincts for random violence are treated as completely positive and with no potential downsides by the main character, who is always treated in-universe as correct. Also the author clearly is internally uncomfortable about his lack of ethics so she attempts to paint him as a tragic figure, warped into viciousness by his mother through no fault of his own. She wants him to be a remorseless killer, but also doesn't want him to be responsible for anything he does, so she tries to use the "but he was abused!!1!" trope to avoid Nicky being responsible for his past actions and thus being a bad person. For some reason, she wants the trappings of nastiness on him but an escape route when that starts to unnerve her.
Honestly the only unifying theme in the books any more is a lack of responsibility; everything in-universe around the main characters is designed to allow them to do whatever they feel like at that moment, without taking responsibility for it in any fashion. It's a very childlike fantasy world in a way.

Date: 2015-05-29 08:07 pm (UTC)
lliira: Fang from FF13 (Fang2)
From: [personal profile] lliira (from livejournal.com)
Yeah, Anita doesn't even take responsibility for eating. She has to be badgered into doing it, and only relents when she's so hungry that the only solution is fast food. Though I can't recall her admitting to being hungry. It's not her that needs to be "fed", it's the ardeur.

Date: 2015-05-30 01:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamstrifer.livejournal.com
Calling it a childlike fantasy world makes me think about why I love to write. Now fantasies are all well and good and escapist fantasy has it's place. But for me, half the fun of writing is having characters make mistakes or get into conflicts, and have them overcome the consequences for their choices. Stories thrive on conflict, and the conflict in LKH's books seem so... tepid. Anita can't ever be in the wrong, Nicky can't be a remorseless killer, and so on and so forth. It makes for very bland characters in spite of the shit LKH throws in their backstories and supposed personalities.

Date: 2015-05-30 02:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkestgrace.livejournal.com
I think childlike fantasy is exactly it. It reads like something I would write as a twelve year old. Anita is the strongest necromancer and has the power to control vampires, which hasn't been seen in thousands of years, and everyone loves her and she has amazing powers that make everyone who loves her stronger when she has (blush giggle) sex but she doesn't want it because she's not a slut, she just wants to make everyone happy! And she's a police officer, because she knows more about the monsters than the police do, but they're all prejudiced because she's so pretty and has so many hot boyfriends! Throw in copious amounts of rape and abuse, because that's how you know your story is dark and edgy, and you're done!

The abuse backstories are really what kills it. It's hard to feel sympathy for Richard being raped by Raina when Gregory was raped and tortured by her. It's hard to feel sorry Gregory when Nathaniel was raped since he was a child. It's hard to feel sorry for Nathaniel when JC was treated as a disposable sexual commodity for centuries. And so on. And all of it makes it very hard to feel sorry for Anita and her dead mother. It sounds like someone whining about a stubbed toe to someone in a full body cast. When horrific rape becomes the norm, there really isn't anywhere to go, and the reader just stops caring.

Date: 2015-05-30 05:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] desert-vixen.livejournal.com

Don't forget the fact that she's the most beautiful woman ever and she's so UNIQUE...

Date: 2015-05-30 06:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkestgrace.livejournal.com
And she's ETHNIC and EXOTIC and everyone is racist towards her, but they're just jealous of her beauty, and her background doesn't have any noticeable influence on her. And bigots and haters change their minds after one conversation with her, and people only hate her for the most strawman reasons.

Date: 2015-05-30 11:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] desert-vixen.livejournal.com

So really all she's missing is aquamarine or violet eyes...

Date: 2015-05-30 11:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkestgrace.livejournal.com
In-universe, dark hair is apparently as rare as violet eyes (which Nathaniel had covered anyway)

Date: 2015-05-30 11:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] suzycat.livejournal.com
To me there's something really creepy about making every single character a victim of rape - frequently systematic, long-term, violent. And even more creepy about making willingness to fuck anybody a marker of having healthily dealt with that.

Date: 2015-05-31 09:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] point-earedpain.livejournal.com
Especially since hyper-sexuality can be a psychological response to long-term sexual abuse. These books are so unsettling.

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