Curious about this for awhile...

[saucyirishlass.livejournal.com]

It's been said in many places by different people that LKH's portrayal of the BDSM lifestyle is off. I know a bit more than just the basics - ah, the joys of reading - and can sort of inherently pick up that something isn't right with her depiction, but I can't really articulate it. I was just curious to hear from those who participate in the lifestyle, what they personally find offensive, frustrating, or just headdesk-worthy about LKH's portrayal. Perhaps they can help make it clearer to me why it feels amiss.

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[vmisery.livejournal.com]

And, on the other side of the coin...

...there's definitely a rape/loss of control fantasy being played out in both books. Hell, the scene in Narcissus in Chains with Micah in the shower was a pretty creepy rape scene, though LKH claimed it wasn't intended that way and re-wrote it (badly) for the paperback. The rewrite was basically "I didn't want it but even though I was saying no, I really did want it".

Which I think ties in very strongly to what you say about shame and fantasies. Giving up control means you can't be held responsible for what you do, after all, which translates into "I fucked six guys in one night and three were strangers, but the ardeur made me do it, so it wasn't slutty". Nonconsensual sex is a popular fantasy for a reason, especially for people who are, for whatever reason, repressed, which seems to describe LKH.

Also, as an aside...I always figured that LKH's refusal to "fix" things was simply a borderline psychotic refusal to acknowledge that she had done something wrong in the first place. I've known too many people in my life who simply can't acknowledge they've screwed up...it's always someone else's fault, or the people doing the criticizing don't know what they're talking about (sound familiar?). Persecution complex.

And of course, anyone is free to disagree with me on any of this, I'm just speaking from my own experience and mind. But kudos on a very well thought out and interesting post.

[the-ellcrys.livejournal.com]

I sometimes wonder if I'm the only one who never even noticed the rape overtones in Narcissus in Chains, because I didn't pick up on it until I read an argument about it on her fanboard. I think I was alread so used to Anita's somewhat abusive relationships by then that I was numb to it. After Jean Claude blackmailing her into a relationship in The Killing Dance, and the rape scene in Blue Moon, Narcissus in Chains didn't even ping my "wow, that's distrubing" radar.

[the-ellcrys.livejournal.com]

*headdesk*

disturbing even...

[hellfire82.livejournal.com]

you! you're here!

now i can say this and not feel ashamed:

"If Anita likes multiple men in public, well there are places that you can go and be put in a sling and be fucked by a line of men"

i have a new holy grail. (poor fiance.)

[the-ellcrys.livejournal.com]

Hee! Yes, I discovered it a couple weeks ago. I have this bizarre thing called "free time" now that allowed me to have hobbies again. This shouldn't surprise you overly much though, since I know we've poked fun at LKH in our respective journals together on a few occassions. Weren't you the one who called her "bad fanfic"?

[hellfire82.livejournal.com]

ah, yes, free time. i too have just been reintroduced to the concept, as of this afternoon.

and possibly... heaven knows i've written better smut than she has. without sues, too.

and if i never read the words "relearn how to breathe" again, it'll be too soon. i HATE that phrase. someone on here said the other day that it's like she just c&p's stuff from one novel to the next, and i agree. especially that phrase.

also, this thread is making me want some smut. i got all excited bc the boy was supposed to be coming home today, and went & got waxed & everything, only to be told "oh yeah, tomorrow."

and now i want some good smut... as in, i'll take the opposite of what that woman's (lkh) peddling.

[vmisery.livejournal.com]

Yeah, it was definitely buried beneath a cloud of mystic magic crap, but basically boiled down to, "it's okay if I hold you against a wall in a shower and sex you even after you keep saying 'don't', because we're soulmates and it's destined to be. Even though you only met me six hours ago. Oh yeah, and you're going to have an amazing orgasm anyway".

I think it was the subtlety of it that I found most disturbing. Very nouveaux domestic abuse.

[tsubaki-ny.livejournal.com]

That was the one with the soap, yeah? I feel pain every time I think of that. Where is the sexy??? The sexy is where????

I do think there are a lot of people, though, who have picked up on the fact that it's pretty much a textbook date rape scenario. (I'm basing this on what I've seen on Amazon, though, so not claiming total accuracy or nothin'..)

[vmisery.livejournal.com]

Yep. The one with the soap. And I winced too.

[leggomylegolas.livejournal.com]

I have yet to find a sex scene in the entire series where Anita didn't have some "reason" that she had to do it - aside from wanting to.

It's that, not the amount of sex or how poorly it's written, that really bothers me. I think Laurel might need therapy and it really bugs me that impressionable young women are probably reading this crap. It's a horrible message to send.

[tsubaki-ny.livejournal.com]

So much agreement. So much. And yet... this stuff is popular. So there's something about it that is speaking and appealing to a pretty effing large group. I don't know how to feel about this.

Possibly I should quit depressing myself with Amazon reviews along the lines of:

"Anita's life just keeps getting more and more complicated and i love following this is a wonderful book and those who dont like it are probably just upset she gets yet another boy toy lol however it all makes sense anita doesn't even seem like a slut she is just well... anita lol WONDERFUL BOOK A MUST READ!!!!!!!!!!!"


(This entire thread is wonderfully fascinating and informative. I had no idea about half this stuff. Good to know.)

(And come to think of it, ignorance like mine is almost assuredly why LKH gets away with this presentation of the lifestyle. Being uninformed, readers -- er, the uninformed ones, of which I'd bet there are a majority -- are perfectly inclined to accept this unflattering and exploitative stuff as true-to-life.)

[jycaegima.livejournal.com]

Is it bad that I really think most of the people still reading are following the same impulse that makes people watch car wrecks?

Honestly, I rather think that most of the people who are still enthralled with the series are young enough that any mention of sex gets a happy thumbs up.

[thesaneminority.livejournal.com]

I didn't notice it either, but I think that's because I tend to skim over sex scenes - IMO, unless the author is incredibly talented at smut, most sex scenes are interchangeable with other scenes with the same gender-pairings and kinks.

[nightangel486.livejournal.com]

I definitely agree with this, it seems like deep down, LKH does like these things but despite her REPEATED claims of being comfortable with the darkity dark darkness in her head, she still has some hangups abotu the things she's into when it comes to sex (perhaps said repeated claims are a case of the lady protesting too much?). That whole "ooh, I want this, but it's bad, so I shouldn't want it" hence the plot devices to force the women to have sex. That way she can write all the sex she wants, the characters can have all the sex they want, and neither she nor the characters have to face the fact that they enjoy these things because omgz it's not HER, it the ARDUEREUR

[catskin.livejournal.com]

I wonder if it's the other way around - She wants to have these interests, kinks and sexual proclivities because it suits her darkitydark image of herself, but she actually doesn't. That's why her writing on the subject is so shallow, tame, and misinformed - because she can't immerse herself in that culture.

[slayra.livejournal.com]

Of course it's obvious to all of us but herself. All this talk of homosexuality, of kinky sex and deep down she's a conservative housewife who decided to write her deepest and most shameful fantasies. Too bad she doesn't actually seem to know much about BDSM and gay sex. And she's too stubborn to research so she just writes it as she thinks it is. But fantasy is not normally the same as reality... :)

[tsubaki-ny.livejournal.com]

If I were a writer, and I had deep down proclivities I was afraid and ashamed of, I don't know that I would choose to work through these issues in front of a "viewing" public of several million internationally, complete with my close-up glamour shots, real name, and a daily blog. (Although exhibitionism might very well be part of the fantasy.)

(I'm starting to feel guilty analyzing this woman I don't know. ^___^ And yet I can't stop...)

I have a couple of semi-serious problems with Jacqueline Carey's writing, but the morality of it is never one of those problems. It's POV, or character, or that kind of writerly stuff which is only my opinion and can easily be argued for or against. But her stuff is never exploitative or disturbing to me, even though she gets into some pretty "dark" sexual territory.

Plus she doesn't spend nearly so much time stoking the cult of her own personality with blogs and black dresses and online histrionics (that I know of), which is probably a major part of it.

And I'm totally rambling now when I should be working...*relurks*

[slayra.livejournal.com]

I agree. There are way too many scenes since book 6 that have creepy 'rape-overtones' (?). I've noticed that. I guess many people don't notice because usually (now, since NiC) it is the men who sometimes are almost forced to have sex. Many women (and men) simply don't realize it that easily when the situation is reversed and it's men instead of women.

Nonconsensual sex is a recurrent fantasy, but I disagree on the repressed. I think many people (mostly women) have such fantasies and not all of them are repressed. Also I wouldn't say 'nonconsensual', I'd call it 'dubious consent'; because in the AB books the sex always begins with somewhat unwilling partners but 20 pages later they're all happily having sex (because of the big plot line that can generate the excuses for that much sex... the ardUer). *blinks* Does that make any sense? ^___^;;

Oh yeah, I totally agree. LKH will never admit she didn't write perfect books and that she made a horrible mistake when introducing the ardUer. I know she said it might have been better without the ardUer but I think she doesn't really believe it. She thinks she's done well. But I say she didn't. There is a reason why most foreign publishers stopped translating and publishing at Obsidian Butterfly. It's not the sex, it's the fact that the new storyline sucks.

[tsubaki-ny.livejournal.com]

There is a reason why most foreign publishers stopped translating and publishing at Obsidian Butterfly.

Did they really? Do you mean, she has actually lost sales over this?

[maeglinyedi.livejournal.com]

A lurker from Holland here. I can tell you that yes, LKH has lost sales over this. Only three books by LKH have ever been translated into Dutch. The first MG in 2003, the first AB in 2004 and the second AB in 2005. They weren't a huge success, and when it seemed that both series were turning into nothing more than boring porn in later books, the Dutch publisher decided to not translate anymore of her work. A very good decision, if you ask me. ;-)

[slayra.livejournal.com]

I did a book cover search once (merely curious how the other covers were designed) and Germany was the only country that published NiC. It's possible that they and other countries are just late, but I don't think that is it. From what I know:
Spain: books 1-3 (series was dropped, I think)
France: books 1-9
And many other countries are the same. My country hasn't published any but then we're still stuck with the classic fantasy genre.

[vmisery.livejournal.com]

Nonconsensual sex is a recurrent fantasy, but I disagree on the repressed. I think many people (mostly women) have such fantasies and not all of them are repressed.

Well, true, can't really make a blanket statement that every woman who has noncon fantasies is repressed, it just seems to me that it's a fantasy that appeals somewhat more to those who have control issues to start with. Then again, I could just be speaking for myself. :P

And yes, the "dubious consent" does make sense...and totally fits the whole fantasy theme. The reluctant bride kind of thing, which actually seems to thread through a lot of the old romance novels my mom used to read. You know, big, strong, handsome and slightly brutish male hero, soft, fragile, virginal female heroine, she's reluctant, he "knows what's good for her", it starts out with "no, don't" and ends with flowers and fireworks.

[slayra.livejournal.com]

Oh. Oh, I misunderstood, sorry. *blushes* I thought you meant sexually repressed. As in, people who are all goody-too-shoes and then... BANG, they have kinky and 'dirty' minds. But, yes, people with control issues (in daily life) may very well be the ones that have those kinds of fantasies. Makes sense. ^__^

Yeah, that was what I was thinking. Personally I dislike those kinds of romances. Tried Christine Feehan (a popular paranormal romance writer, I think) but I hated the hero and heroine exactly because of that. I like romance novels where the heroine has a backbone and while the hero is a handsome (and inteligent) rascal he is also open-minded enough to change and to see the error of his ways. I like both of the protagonists to be inteligent, assertive and active participants in the action, not those 'man goes to battle, woman just sits home and is pretty' kinds of books. But I guess a lot of people do like them as they are still quite popular... go figure. ^___^;;

[terrie01.livejournal.com]

I would say dubious consent is a perfectly valid fantasy, but when it comes to stories based around it, most readers aren't looking for a simple description, which is what LKH writes. What separates the good ones from the bad ones is the focus on the dynamic between the characters. LKH gives us none of that, jumping straight to "Look! Sex!" Boring.